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Grip, release, repeat.
A frenzy far ahead on the road.
A desperation revealed by subtle expressions.
I see these random segments of madness
materialize into a black demon
drifting towards me from miles away
as if on a shallow breeze
Then I turn back to what I was doing and I feel a moist breath on my neck
I turn and it's black eyes are an inch from mine.
All of a sudden it's hands are on me.
It subdues my great strength as if I were only a small child under the might of a lion
I gasp for air, and smoke scorches my lungs
I say a prayer but no moisture is on my tongue
Madness has me crippled and I feel it's hunger
I feel a knife slipped in the middle of my lumba
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they make a poet out of me
my lover is a poet
not just with their words
but with their gaze
with the touch of their skin
and their lips on mine
my lover creates poetry just by breathing
poetry of the world
and poetry out of me
in a way i can't believe
(for fear that they may leave)
my lover makes a poet out of me
for i see stars in their gaze
and warmth in their smile
they're lovely
and i want to compose them
for the poet that they are
but they, like a galaxy...
indescribable
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When will you learn?
When will you learn I'm broken apart? All torn inside but I don't give up. But when you look at me I see your torn to like me.
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I really like how the tone is indifferent and it can apply to many situations that you find in school - whether it be a boring teacher droning on and on about a subject you don't like or even students who have nothing better to do than gossip. Very enjoyable to read
I really like how the tone is indifferent and it can apply to many situations that you find in school - whether it be a boring teacher droning on and on about a subject you don't like or even students who have nothing better to do than gossip. Very enjoyable to read